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now, the 3rd of June, 2013, there are 11 people on Earth who was born in
the 1800's. These people are all older than 112 years old, being the oldest
among the oldest people alive in the world. These people are now receiving
medical help to maintain their lives, as their bodies are not strong enough to sustain
itself. In a way, the medications are playing a huge role in their survival. If
these people were living in 1913, with the age over 112, unfortunately they
will not be able to stay alive much longer. Since the mortality
rate of a person increases geometrically as someone ages. without the aid
of medical procedures, it can be said that it is almost impossible to live over
the age of one hundred let alone a hundred and ten. However, as science
develops and medications improve, people are expected to live much longer than just
110.


In the end, the hope mankind has, going towards immortality is not totally absurd. Although it may sound hypothetical, the chances are that people will some day reach a point of creating immortal humans.There are current science groups working on the creation of immortal humans. The pioneer of such research collaboration is the SENS Research Foundation that supports several research pathways that could lead to engineered negligible senescence in humans. Some time in the future, people may be transformed into a species that do not die just because it's time for them to go.
Dreaming of mortality in the 21st century might be a little risky. However, in the 21st century people will exceed the Guinness World Records of the oldest person ever alive. I might be able to hit the age of 150, and my parents and teachers might be able to meet their 130th birthday. Moreover, in the 21st century, people will have hope in science, of which that one day, mankind will not be able to exceed their limits, whatever it is.
Here's a video about aging and more!
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DeleteI think your essay is explicit about prolonged life expectancy. However, this post seems that it does not consider the limits of toefl essay. Also, some parts are researched too much that it has gone off course. Beside that, this is a good essay that elicits some important ideas
ReplyDeleteI like how you focused on the issue of life expectency. Thanks for the video for more information
ReplyDeletepersonally I actually find this essay to one of the better ones I read.
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